Reviews for Garden of Sorrow
ByQuillandInk chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
I really like this poem, epecially the line far beyond tomorrow, it really shows the mindset of a child, still naive but determined, definatly one of my favourites. :)
TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
I like how it's not so free verse as some of your other poems are - like "Last and Final Time", because that makes it have a sort of naivety, almost the kind that a child has, so the rhyme scheme definitely works to the poem's advantage here :) I could imagine this being a song... the repetition of "Flowers so sweet in the garden of sorrow, I know one day we'll meet, far beyond tomorrow" makes it seem like the little girl's mantra, like she's trying to keep herself together despite her grief. All in all, a very nice job :)