|Reviews for Last and final time|
| TheGlycoprotein chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
The imagery here is so intense and absolutely beautiful - you capture the camaraderie of the soldiers brilliantly, and that's a very important element when writing poems about war that involve the soldiers themselves. I liked the formatting, and the way that the soldier says goodbye to his friend and stays with him until the end is especially touching. Really nice work :)
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 11/21/2012
Awww... sniff .
Oh i see. To be honest, it was kinda gay. But it was cute and so saaaad .