|Reviews for Story in Need of a Title|
| Helen Cole chapter 1 . 3/6/2014
Interesting. Though this is so simple, it hits hard and the few words say a lot
"Profession of Mother: Not applicable" - This is an extremely strong line, if it is meant to imply that maybe by 2067 civilization will revert back to where women's roles are less valued.
It's like a label for someone's file.
Just the word "Vicar" whatever that means brings with it mystery.
I'd be really interested to learn more about where you wanted to take this idea.
I would love if you could read and review my story "On the Other End of the Phone" by Helen Cole.