Reviews for Darkness
Art7Freak chapter 1 . 11/23/2012
It was a really slow story. Er, the way I read it was. And by that, I mean I just read the words slowly for the purpose of the context. Now, concerning your story, I really liked your use of personification (I think it is. I forgot...) though I view darkness more as a comfort than a burden. It can hide the truths and lies, in a way that light cannot. And for the part of "nothing is darkness and darkness is nothing," I write quotes like that sometimes. "Humans live in a world of eternity. Everything serves a purpose. However, if there is no love, there are no dreams. If there are no dreams, there is no hope. Without hope, there is nothing. Yet something is born out of nothing. So is the cycle of the human mind." -me
Donovan chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
Not too bad man! :D 3