Reviews for My Bitter Friends
Eleantris chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Wow. This is fantastic, and so powerful and well written. Well done, this is such a good piece. :)
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
What a dark, intriguing, bitter poem this is, it's superb. It's like a great mystery which leaves the reader asking so many questions, almost like a detective would. The imagery and flow are always great. The word 'friend' is a little mystery of it's own; you don't know why they speaker is calling them a 'friend' when clearly they have hurt the speaker (I think they've killed the speaker in some way, probably an accident is my guess). Maybe it was a bitter comment, meaning you were suppose to be my friend so why would you hurt me. Very interesting and definitely not a piece to be ashamed of. Great work.
Meadow Frost chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
A mystery indeed, it left me wondering.
Great work. :-)
Valenteen chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Gorgeously bitter poem.
Naver chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I like the ending, and the line "It was dark when you stole my body from my mind,"
I feel like the bitter man is talking about when he was being insane and now that he understands what has happened he makes a toast.