Oh, no! I need more! Oh, please?

Hi! I forgot about this story until I got the alert about it. I pretty much ignore all FP alerts these days, but I'm definitely going to be sticking with this one until the end :) I'm not sure if Matt and Cameron are going to become a thing, but I really hope not! I like their friendship, and I love Aiden.

Just a note: you tend to write "loose" when you really mean "lose". Loose is pronounced differently and has a different meaning e.g. "I don't want to lose you" vs "His shirt was loose". :)

omg thanks for updating! I'm really happy with the way things turned out, to be honest. Can't wait to read more and see how it all unravels. Keep on writing :)

I love this story so much. I love your writing. I love you.

Interesting plot. I haven't seen anything like it before.

So Aiden isn't some sort of anormality then? It's a family trait? That's weird...
His father is an asshole. He should have said he's infertile or something and they could have adopted a child. It's not exactly fair on the child if he already hated his existence and his father did too. That's incredibly selfish of him. But I never liked his parents anyway...
This immortality thing has me intrigued. I hope it works out somehow. I really don't want to see Aiden fall into an eternity of drug haze and depression.

lololololololol issues

Now that was one weird encounter at the door... I really wonder who that was.
I'm really starting to like Matt. His life obviously isn't all that easy either. I like your troubled characters :P
Aiden is going to be so mad at the of them... Getting drunk AND high? That's just begging for a huge fight.

This story is amazing. I am completely captivated. the characters are so complicated yet simple. I love it all. Please update soon :3

Ok so just read the rest of this and notice you already sorted out the definitely vs defiantly thing so ignore my last review!

I like how the story's progressing so far, and I half want to meet Daniel but half don't. Bit I'm excited to see how that plays out!

I think it's really interesting how this story is barely supernatural at all. It started off being all about his immortality but now it's like that's just one other random aspect of his personality. I like it. Are you planning on touching on that storyline more? Like why he is the way he is?

And also this is just a matter of personal preference so don't take it like its criticism or anything, but I much prefer Cam's POV to Aiden's. I feel like the general feel of this story is that it has so many lingering questions and secrets, so I liked it how Aiden was slightly mysterious and we only saw him through Cam's eyes. Although reading Aiden's POV is nice, I can't help but think a lot of the things he's revealing would be more impactful if we found out when Cam did. For example, Daniel not being dead. But that's just my opinion.

Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is a really good story with a super interesting concept, and I'm excited to read more.. but I'm sorry, it drives me absolutely insane when people write "defiantly" instead of "definitely". They mean two completely different things.

It would usually kind of turn me off a story but I actually really like this one so I kept reading it. But I just felt like I should point it out in case no one has already.

Oh and not a huge deal, but in this chapter you also wrote "take for granite". Probably a typo.

Okay, I hope this is Aiden knocking on that door and not Daniel... That would be awful.
Matt seems like a nice enough person. Troubled and guilty, but nice. The way he talked Cam out of his panic attack was kinda sweet.
Looking forward to more, as usual. And I really need to reread everything so far because I feel like I keep forgetting important details...

Oh my. The poor boys, they just never get to have a nice time without any problems, hm? Though I do understand why Aiden's doing that...
Anyway, glad you updated. Looking forward to more.

I tend to skip over stories with the 'supernatural' tag because they're usually about werewolves or vampires, but this one sounds super interesting and unique. Can't wait to read more!

I don't even know what to say