Reviews for Something I Can Never Have
tleiaxu chapter 8 . 2/3/2013
I absolutely loved chapters 1-5... I felt I was getting to know Cam as this hard, angsty guy. Then he got all lovey dovey and "kitteny" with Aiden and suddenly I lost track of both their personalities. Still, Your writing is very good, sentences are clear, action is easy to follow. I'm curious about Cam's immortality, where it came from, and how it will come into play as the story evolves. Great story so far, I have like 15 more chapters to go before I'm caught up, so I am looking forward to reading more.
Facella chapter 21 . 1/15/2013
Okay, first of all: That jerk is still alive? What the hell was that guy thinking when he lied to Cam? So not cool. And then he just had to tell Aiden. That's just really, really low of him. Ugh.
I loved the latest chapter. It's so... intensive, I guess. It gave a really good insight in Aiden's thinking. Those two are one messed up couple...
Cj Quinn chapter 21 . 1/15/2013
Multiple sad faces.
Cj Quinn chapter 20 . 1/15/2013
Sigh, he'll have to find out eventually
Cj Quinn chapter 19 . 1/15/2013
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwe! It's so fluffy!
Facella chapter 19 . 1/5/2013
I tried reading this story several times, but somehow I never got past the first few paragraphs. Finally, I completely ran out of reading material and decided to give your story another try. It wasn't that I thought it was bad or anything, something just didn't click. But today it did. And I'm so glad I kept reading. I love, love, LOVE your story! Cameron and Aiden are so wonderful. They're so very sweet together. I love your writing. It's great, it makes really feel for the two.
I can't wait to read more about them. I don't think I could ever get tired of them, so if you have another 100 chapters in your brain (or up your sleeve), I'd read them all and still want more
Can't wait to see what happens next!
KairinDenrei chapter 19 . 1/2/2013
Wow that was really dark and heavy. But also incredebly cute and insightful. Aiden and Cam are just perfect together. I liked the flow of the story as well as your writing style.
You could actually end it here, but I'm selfishly hoping for some more.

Best regards
Cj Quinn chapter 18 . 12/31/2012
Sad face! and they were just getting so happy
Cj Quinn chapter 17 . 12/29/2012
Cj Quinn chapter 16 . 12/28/2012
feelz... pain.,;,W:fdeJ'EQPIRGJW[;ERFHJE[R
Erstel 908iu chapter 15 . 12/23/2012
At least Daniel's dead.
Cj Quinn chapter 14 . 12/21/2012
CUUUUUUUUUUUTE And yet sad... I need a drink (tea i swear!)
Lykan chapter 13 . 12/18/2012
I hope you'll keep this up, I'm really enjoying this story! It's rare I find a story that holds my interest so well.

I noticed no errors in this, as far as grammar and flow. Spelling, as I've said, takes a backseat to those.

Please update soon!

Lykan chapter 6 . 12/18/2012
I much enjoy reading this story. Very detailed, and it flows well, despite seeming short and to the point. I shall read more, but for now I have nothing but praise for you.

I'll ignore minor spelling errors, as they didn't put me off the story. You may want to find a beta or reread it yourself a few times if it bothers others.

Cj Quinn chapter 12 . 12/14/2012
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