Reviews for The Calm before the End
Ophelia Schmit chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
The beginning is excellent! Good job on that! However, at times there seems to be more adjectives than necessary.

The similie of her eyes is just perfect. This was sad, the ending, but I wouldn't want it any other way.

Hermie
Felrain chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
Woah, very powerful! Well done!