|Reviews for The Veldt: Alternate Ending|
| SHINORASHI chapter 1 . 2/13/2019
This is absoulutely amazing.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/30/2017
| JJ Prince chapter 1 . 3/3/2017
This is cool!
| lola chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
can i ask you something?
| Minikemon chapter 1 . 10/28/2015
I think this is a very possible ending. Amazing job.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/2/2014
| storylover123 chapter 1 . 10/7/2014
OMG THAT WAS AMAZING! This is one of the greatest alternate endings I have ever read. Thank you Luna's Child!
| Harrison chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Oh my god this piece is incredible! Good job
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaang! I feel so sadistic because i thought that was hilarious! :P
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 1 . 6/13/2013
Wow! A much better ending. But I think Ray's intention was to leave the ending open for interpretation, but this is fantastic! I really, really enjoyed. Aside from a few typos, you did an incredible job!
| Fallen Midnight Angel chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Oh my gods.
Woah, this ending was way awesome. I love how you made, like, everyone die. Oh gosh, . You're so silly. How could you think that you could beat a lioness? But poor Peter...
Did you notice that their names were Peter and Wendy, like Peter Pan and Wendy Darling?