Reviews for The Lake People: Werewolves, Hate, War, and New Beginnings Book Two
MileyRowling chapter 18 . 1/30/2017
Nice one! It's been awhile, hasn't it?
MileyRowling chapter 17 . 6/27/2016
Surprised to see you updating this one!
MileyRowling chapter 16 . 1/26/2015
Great work! I really liked it!
MileyRowling chapter 15 . 12/3/2014
Great work!
MileyRowling chapter 14 . 1/22/2014
Great update!
MileyRowling chapter 13 . 12/9/2013
I think this story has a lot of action in it. Great work!
MileyRowling chapter 12 . 10/8/2013
I really like how you are able to write more than one character's POV! Great work!
AlysonSerenaStone chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
"This is her," I said, turning to look out the window.-I think "she" would be better than "her." "Her" reads kind of awkward.

Other than that, I didn't see anything. I really liked the preface. I know you wanted people to look over the other book, but I've already read that.
MileyRowling chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
Great update!
AnonymousReads chapter 11 . 7/6/2013
Yay an update I was scared you gave up on it. Update again soon. Please. :)
MileyRowling chapter 9 . 6/10/2013
Nice update! I can't wait to see what happens next!
MileyRowling chapter 8 . 6/2/2013
I like this one better than the first one. I hope you keep going.
AnonymousReads chapter 8 . 5/13/2013
Oh no no no no no. I really hope that you are going to write the next chapter soon. The lake pack really needs a new alpha because Nicks prejudice is really starting to get me mad. Mary Ellen looks like she is really going to help. I wonder what Tyler perspective is like. Again I hope that lake pack gets a new alpha cause Nick has made bad orders over and over again with the fighting and not allowing them friends which means no other support. Alright I think you got it. I can't wait for the next chapter. Update soon. Please. :)