Omg that was such a cute and sad story!

This is a beautiful story I love it. Sad and the twist at the end was perfect.

Some bits need a tweak of editing but overall it is a great story!
Keep writing

Lve L
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I was hesitant to start to read this, but I am glad that I did. The ending made me so sad, but it was a touching story. It was beautiful. (:

Hear that? That is the sound of my heart breaking

part two? i want to hear what happens!

I truly enjoyed this.

Wow, I really enjoyed reading this story. At first, I was a bit meh about reading it, but I'm really surprised. I think that you should write a second one, or what happens after this. It's really great.
-Bluesparks

This was truly touching. Thank you for the story.