Reviews for Memory Burns
Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2013
Hey Shannon! This is Kayla. This is REALLY COOL! And it's a good idea! This is a great introduction and I like how you made it short and yet really effective. YOUR AN AMAZING AUTHOR :)
Sarah chapter 2 . 1/30/2013
This is an awesome start! I love how you added the flashbacks to the drug dealer part so that we weren't lost. I also love how you didn't mention very many names so that things were mysterious and we didn't know everything right away.
smileycat0 chapter 2 . 1/30/2013
This is a great start! I love how you added the flashbacks so that we're not completely and totally lost. But on the other hand I love how you didnt give away too much- too many names so that there was still that mysterious aspect.
myheart4you chapter 2 . 12/5/2012
I keep seeing your story pop up, but I haven't read it. I'm glad I did :)
This seems totally realistic, the way she didn't pay the drugs and that's why the house burnt down. This is really a fascinating story