|Reviews for Even Longer (revised version)|
| BookcraZzaY chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I am speechless on how to review this...its just flawless. I can picture her going insane in my head. I have a really strong mental image from this of a character from the Salem witch trails book "The Crucible". I don't understand how you write these poems that are deep and so well written; and that carry a true and dark story. ITS AMAZING !
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I really like this piece and also reminds of a more female version of the Mad Hatter. This is a very intriguinng poem and the imagery is very tangible and awesome. I loved it because the imagery and the distance of the speaker to the subject are simply chilling yet inciting because I feel like the reader and the speaker are watching as the subject slowly turns mad. Superb piece.
| AchievingNirvana chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
This is great. Your language makes what you're trying to say very tangible. Great work! I would like to see more like this!