Reviews for The Lord's Consort
darkworld777 chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
I like the ending of this chapter as it shows Galen's fierceness as well as his compassion for the main character. The middle part where you describe his equipment is also very interesting as it showcases his combat style, which hopefully we'll see later. The bag seems to be a large enigma in the story and hopefully will be expanded upon.
darkworld777 chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
I like the character of Galen. The ruthlessness you give him combined with his facial description gives the reader a very vivid image of him. The boy being a girl is a very nice plot twist and keeps the reader engaged. The grammar and spelling are once again excellent and I'm looking forward to more of this story.
Whiger chapter 4 . 11/29/2012
Gotta admit, I did not see Galen being a merman coming. Really good story, can't wait to see what else you come up with.