|Reviews for A Different Light|
| windless morales chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
I like this one, particularly how you used the title:
"And as we grew older
I began to see you in a different light"
"With such an outgoing streak
I saw you i a different light"
"At the time we were friends
Despite that different light" etc.
The only complaint I could possibly have would be that the rhyme for lines six and seven seems a bit strained.
| J.J. Robisson chapter 1 . 11/27/2012
Same here, brah! Going through it right now. Even if he doesn't have good grades and he's a jerk :/ oh, well. I like the poem :)