Reviews for When He Comes
YFIQ chapter 1 . 1/1/2014
He mostly comes after fat people, that way he can get them to slim down. That's the reason why he's called Slenderman.
AriaCreates chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
NOT THIS SMALL! Dude, I told you it needed major editing. Why is it that you say my poetry is terrible and then you go post this. WTH? Come on you are better than this, and you know it. Add more to it. And try to make it worth while, you adding that at the end makes us really think that you did waste our time, cuz ya did, but we aren't going to say that. I love ya dude, but come on. You can't be this big of a hypocrite, and then expect me not to jump on you for it.