Reviews for Circle of Despair
Temairine chapter 3 . 12/19/2012
The poem is very moving. Although not a poem in the traditional sense it is all the better for it. The words appear carefully chosen to have maximum effect.

Also the writing style and spacing are good as well, brilliant to my mind

My favourite bit though is the chorus of 'what am I' this repeats throughout making the characters more than one person. While retaining their individuality they are symbols for their characters.

Almost like a song of the dead telling their story, that is what the chorus reminds me of. The poem is wonderful and this is just my interpretation

This is just my view though. With such a deep poem there are many different ways it can be read. Still no matter the sadness it is beautiful