Reviews for Sanctuary Vol II: Earth's Protectors
Clear World chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
It's soooo long. Not bad, but sooooo long.

I tried to read it but it was never giving me a break. I need a break somewhere to recollect my thought and figure what is happening.
Needless chapter 1 . 11/29/2012
I strongly recommend you divide this into several smaller chapters. An 18,000 word chapter isn't very attractive.