Reviews for Curiosity Killed The Angel
breakthehabit chapter 4 . 10/16/2013
Haha wow. So I just read the reviews on this story (sorry I'm spamming you by the way), and I'd have to agree slash disagree with some of 'em. I think the ending was perfect. It's just perfect. Not what you'd expect, but it fits the story cause all this is so unexpected, for lack of a better word. The only thing that I would be bothered about if I'm not still in this shocked state of w.t.f., is how they broke up. That wasn't very good, but I'm not complaining. And then, like I said before, the second person pov isn't something you read every day, but I think it's the perfect pov to write this story on - you can see and wonder about what she's thinking and kind of feel what she's feeling; you see the world through her eyes, and it's amazing and intriguing because of her character. It's really fantastic the way you put this story together. It's better that that other story I read from you, The Girl In The Orange Tights, I think? And also, halfway through the story I had a omfg moment thinking, what-if-the-author-is-actually-this-person-and-it' s-a-biography-of-her-life-or-something-holy-smokes -I-can't-even-believe-it-what. So yeah. I applaud you, I tip my hat to you, I'd love to see more of your work. Just one request, if possible? Let's try something that's not about killing people! lol. What about humour, or fantasy, or I dunno cool undercover spy and gang things? Or even romance in the business world.. I don't know. I just can't really relate to uh. Killing people lol. You make it awesome though, I probably wouldn't read stories about serial killers if you weren't the author. :D Lates.
breakthehabit chapter 3 . 10/16/2013
Ps. I'm going to read all the stories on that list and answer your poll question. Give me a week or so. :P
breakthehabit chapter 11 . 10/16/2013
You're crazy. Holy shit what did I just read? I've neglected my studies, I feel like nothing's real, this just wow. You should write more.. yeah.
breakthehabit chapter 9 . 10/16/2013
I'm surprised her dad just took it all in. ._. She sounds like she has great parents. Wanted to say something else but I can't remember..
breakthehabit chapter 2 . 10/16/2013
Well, that came out of nowhere. xD I never thought I'd be so gutsy. ;D Also, noticed that her first name is Autumn. I think that name suits her better than Lucy or Luce or anything. I love their chemistry.
breakthehabit chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
Super curious why she went to jail. Hm.. or should I say "me" or "you". xD Interesting, I like it.
Charlie Walnut chapter 11 . 2/10/2013
I don't know how I feel about this ending. This was a great story, that's for sure. It was pretty interesting being sympathetic of a serial killer. But that's something you always hear about in documentaries-how they always seem so social and they were great people and oh my god, you would've never expected him to be the type to hurt a fly. I think you've created a really complex character. I consider myself an attentive reader and in the end, I'm still trying to wrap my mind around Lucy.

The ending doesn't fit the overall mood of the story. Maybe it's rushed? I can't exactly pinpoint it. There's not enough closure, that's one thing I can say. An epilogue might fix that but that doesn't seem to fit this story either. I wish I could tell you more about it.

I see you've written more stories and I'm going to read them all. I never expected to read a second-person narrative and like it. It just never struck me as appealing. I don't even like first-person that much. You've made me a fan. I read that you like to write about interesting people and we need more writers like you.

Sorry for the terrible review. It's brief and I'm not saying everything I want to.
LuxVenus chapter 11 . 1/7/2013
Similar to the to the last chapter I find that there is a lack of closure. The ending is abrupt and feels rushed. Again I'm not really sure how to go about changing that. Maybe adding more detail in certain places. Maybe another chapter would help close up the story. Perhaps one of her friends or Melanie makes a visit to see her in prison . Maybe a year later after her trials for her murders. Not telling you that because I don't want the story end but because I think that's what the story needs. Either way this was a great read and I won't be forgetting it for some time.
LuxVenus chapter 10 . 1/7/2013
Well when the truth is revealed to Melanie it does seem kind of lacking but I can't really think of another way to make it better either. Neither seem like the dramatic type so this works. I guess the lack of closure the scene gives is the problem but I don't know. Maybe next chapter will fix that.
CheeseAwesome chapter 10 . 1/6/2013
M-My heart's about to break... This chapter shows the true beauty of Lucy. For some reason, I can feel her pain. It seems as you have experienced this before, dear author. If you haven't then I must say that you have a very large and touching imagination.
CheeseAwesome chapter 9 . 1/4/2013
Lucy must be the most bad ass person on this earth. She's a serial killer with well hidden guilt but it truly does eat her up on the inside, yet she has the guts to come right out and say it at the appropriate time.

Your stories, I love them. They're always on the dark side which I prefer more than those highschool first love stories that get old after awhile. I can only hope that Melanie won't... Freak out when Lucy tells her.
Momo chapter 9 . 1/4/2013
I'm dreading the next chapters, but I'm really curious .
Great story :)
LuxVenus chapter 8 . 1/3/2013
WOW. I don't think I can describe the emotion that comes to me when ever I read a chapter of this. I have to agree with you and say this is definitely one of your better stories and only now can I fully appreciate your style of writing. I think a huge part of the reason this story has been so successful in it's delivery was the way it was written (is it second person? I think it is.) This story is powerful and all around amazing. Its been a great experience to walk in Lucy's shoes and no matter what happens to her in the next few chapters she will forever be one of my favorite characters. I look forward to more good reading from you.
Bloodside chapter 8 . 12/30/2012
This story is breaking my heat QQ, in a good way though.

I've read a couple of your stories and this one by far is one probably my favourite out of all of them. I love how the story is told in 2nd story and it's unique view. I love how you've fleshed out all of your characters, all of them have their own personality and distinct little quirks. All in all this is a wonderful little story, and also a very touching one.

Also just my own opinion. I feel as these kind of stories are your forte, and much of your strength is based upon the themes of friendship, redemption,loneliness, learning about oneself and teasing the reader XD That's why i think that if you decide to make a new story sometime in the furture, i feel like you should type up a story that goes into a completely different direction. One that's happy and has a bit of drama but isn't the main point of the story, the main point should be the happiness instead. I think so you should learn how to make the reader melt with pure "D'AWWWWW". Learning how to do this will help make your drama (a strong point of yours) have a lot more of an impact :3.

tl;dr my advice: write happy story in future to learn how to make drama have that much more of an impact
Affair chapter 3 . 12/17/2012
Such a unique story. I hope it's not tragic... But it seems that it'll probably be.
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