|Reviews for Untitled|
| EmpressAND chapter 35 . 1/9/2015
It took me hours but I finally finished it and holy crap am I happy I did. This is absolutely fantastic. I was drawn in from the beginning. This concept of it is just brilliant and as I was reading it I kept wondering why it wasn't already a book. Needless to say, I'm itching for the third installment so I can finally have a definite ending. I hope everything goes well and this is published because I sure as hell with buy it and read it over and over again like a lunatic. This is awesome. I loved it so much. Thanks for sharing your creation with the world and good luck!
| Acornn chapter 36 . 12/28/2014
| joycelyn.o.ting chapter 36 . 12/28/2014
I'd prefer if you just took down the entire book so others won't be left hanging because of chapters removed. I know I'LL get angry because of that. ;) I'm glad I got to finish reading it though, it was really good. The plot was exceptionally original and interesting, I love how you wrote it, and I wish you the best of luck in publishing it. :D
Though I found James' death a great shame, and am sympathetic of Ben's loss, I think it was very logical and realistic compared to a happy ever after. I know there must be others who disliked it, but I'd like to tell you that ultimately it was the right path to choose. :) I appreciate that Grace didn't just jump into a relationship with Robin without any consideration like a typical love sick teenager. That would've been extremely cliche. xD
Even though Grace seemed selfish by doing that, it also shows a maturity and fore-sightedness that some lack when supposedly in love. That does not mean I disapprove of her ultimate decision to be with him, because I think she displayed much courage by choosing an uncertain future despite knowing her fears might one day come true. I would also like to commend on her willingness to part with Robin if he did find another love, as it meant that she loved him enough to let him go, and is also an act of great selflessness.
All in all, this was an amazing piece of work that I thoroughly enjoyed and was fortunate enough to finish reading before you took it down. I know that Book 3 will probably not be posted here, but I would love to read it, and hope that you can upload at least the initial draft work. It was a pleasure reading your story, and good luck on your publication! :)
| Cazie chapter 36 . 12/28/2014
Awesome! Good luck! :D Hopefully people will love this story as much as I do! :D
| Kordelia chapter 35 . 12/25/2014
Fantastic! the story line never lost mu interest and I would love to see it continue.
| futuretimespinner chapter 35 . 11/24/2014
Wow, this was amazing and did reach me :) I'm sure you'll have no trouble with the publishing/agents, and just wondering have you posted the first book on Fictionpress and if so, what is it called?
Looking forward to the third book x
| TMSantos chapter 35 . 11/24/2014
Thank you for sharing this story to all of us. I think it's beautiful.
| Guest chapter 35 . 11/23/2014
CAN'T WAIT FOR THE 3rd one!
| Acornn chapter 35 . 11/23/2014
This is such a good story. Good luck on editing and getting it published (I KNOW it will get published, it's such a great book!). Will you be posting up the third book as well?
| Cazie chapter 35 . 11/23/2014
Oh my god! That was amazing and depressing at the same time this was awesome! :D
I was listening to Go the Distance from Hercules (don't judge xD) and it finished just as I read the last word and it was beautiful and amazing and I am crying xD
This is a perfect story! I feel horrible about James, but this was awesome and I also feel completely happy! Urgh I don't know this feeling!
Anyway, I'm so glad I could make it to the end! :D The first time I couldn't, sadly! I one day couldn't make it to the chapter and then it kinda snowballed from there. The end, though! :D It's amazing and I have no words to describe it! :D
Sorry for a long review but I'm actually so happy right now! I'm so excited about this! xD
| futuretimespinner chapter 34 . 11/22/2014
This is amazing, I've stayed up until 2am reading this until I finished Chapter 34, and I've saved this story onto my phone so I can read it whenever ;) This story and your writing skill is actually MUCH better than many books I've read. This whole concept is fascinating and I've been reading non stop. Thank you for writing this, and I can't wait until the next chapter(s).
| TMSantos chapter 34 . 11/21/2014
1. Main characters' happily ever after BUT it won't come right away; this happily ever after involves full healing for James and Robin, better connections with Grace's family, Ben and James being together, Grace and Robin being together (but then this will take a while, knowing the two of them)
2. Insentients' happily ever after with them not being discriminated; I imagine this will take a much longer time to happen but it will
3. The cure doesn't get in on time, or it isn't enough for the two of them. James dies and Robin dies later. Grace will have to comfort people: Robin and Ben (for James' death) and herself (for both deaths). While Robin lives on a little longer he may feel more anger for the people who started the sickness/don't have the cure and perhaps this will make his death come sooner
4. People of the enemy organization hunt Robin and James down before the cure gets to them. Robin and James will be used for experimentation while Grace and Ben may have to force themselves to live as though James and Robin never existed.
There may be more but that's what I've got right now.
| xCrazykindofWeirdx chapter 34 . 11/20/2014
They must survive! pleaseee
| xCrazykindofWeirdx chapter 33 . 11/18/2014
omg... getting exciting! wow grace's mum?! a nice bit of history there... loving it, cant wait for more :)
| TMSantos chapter 33 . 11/18/2014
I think "Oh my God" is the most accurate comment I can give now, for a few reasons:
1. Mom of Grace was involved in this
2. Mom of Grace knows cure
3. Story is almost ending?
4. Grace had another sibling
Reallllly love this