Reviews for Short Stories from StoryLover12345
Roseshadow chapter 2 . 11/14/2013
That was really cool
And i just wanted to say that is that Ryan from school
Ryan Mathews chapter 1 . 6/20/2013
Amazing!
ihateyourmom101 chapter 3 . 2/24/2013
creepy...
but nice
Simon101swag chapter 3 . 2/2/2013
Wow...
That is WE-I-RD...
I mean, no offence, but you gotta kind admitt - a sponge island with creepy aliens-cool but slightly strange.
I guess it shows you vivid imagination, huh...
I assume from your title that "ALLISON'S ISLAND" is a oneshot-but im asking if you are to continue?

I just want to say i like your writing.
It has a very casual-not to pro or fancy taste, and that is good considering the type of audience you are entertainig with you writing

You seem to have a developing maturiety (sorry- incorrect spelling) for your pieces, but it went kinda backward
but that's non of my buisness, sorry for pointing that out...

Otherwise nice piece, its cool to read short stories sometimes instead of your good-old long, predictable novels that cost 10 bucks at a store...

-swag
David Goff chapter 2 . 12/5/2012
Must you bring tears to my eyes? Seriously though, This is a great piece of work. It's incredible how you display such emotion through literature. The story and such are flawless, however, you may want to do a quick spell-check over things before you post them. If you did, and it was just the site messin' it all up, then that's their problem. Bravo, and best of luck unto you in your further chapters.
towledestroyer chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Awwwwwwww!
Archia chapter 2 . 12/2/2012
Aww, that's sad, but then there's a contentment about it too. I loved how the emotions came through in such a short story. I thought the end of the first part was really nice, and that was sweet how it was his first words. And that sweetness made it sadder when the father dies. Really nice.
Archia chapter 1 . 12/2/2012
This story made me smile. I loved how such a short piece captured a wonderful moment of kindness. It was really nice.