Reviews for Breaking the Ice
tinkerturtle99 chapter 28 . 12/17/2012
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Write more please! Or I'll cry! JK! This is the best story I've read so far!
tinkerturtle99 chapter 25 . 12/17/2012
What the hell!
tinkerturtle99 chapter 24 . 12/17/2012
Omg I love it!
tinkerturtle99 chapter 23 . 12/17/2012
Omg I understand now!
tinkerturtle99 chapter 22 . 12/17/2012
Great cliff hanger!
tinkerturtle99 chapter 21 . 12/17/2012
Omg I don't understand what he did and why he doesn't want to love anyone? And usually understand these types of stories. Please explain?
tinkerturtle99 chapter 7 . 12/14/2012
Write more!
tinkerturtle99 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiii
jojoba-music-girl chapter 21 . 12/14/2012
Yay, new chapters! I'm looking forward to knowing how Abe and Hana will react to each others secret
jojoba-music-girl chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
This is really really well-written! And very original! Gonne read on now :-)
myheart4you chapter 15 . 12/11/2012
Whoa. This has just gone around the bend from normal teen angst to a supernatural, weird thing. Not weird in a bad way, but whoa.
myheart4you chapter 14 . 12/11/2012
I wonder what's with his scar O.o
Aha! I finally found something you could improve!
You say he's emo and his dad dies and all that, but I can't really tell with the way you wrote him. I know it's difficult in first person, which is why I changed mine to third, but try.
myheart4you chapter 13 . 12/11/2012
Omigosh. That's awwwfffulll. The hanging thing was a bit dramatic, but that's okay.
Poor Abe :(
myheart4you chapter 12 . 12/11/2012
Now I know how Cerise is significant...
That's cute, but sad. I really liked Hana's reaction. Well, not liked, but you know.
myheart4you chapter 11 . 12/11/2012
Gosh, if he feels like that from a kiss on the cheek, I'd wonder how he'd feel with a real kiss
Ummm what's her disability?
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