Reviews for Hybrid
deets1 chapter 18 . 2/9/2014
Okay now I feel like a stalker for reading so much of your stories but oh well.

Anyway, that wasn't fair! You introduce us to this beautiful friendship (well, re-introduce us more intensely to it) and in the next chapter you end it after a snapshot! Well it's not over but it's sooooo sadddddd... I can't! I actually did tear up at the last line of the story. And then after I calmed down I did it again after I realized that Nyx is re-doing the myxventure and continuing the thing after this much time...

I'm just sad, okay?

I can't. But other than that I still loved the story! Ended quicker than I expected, again, though that more reflects on the fact that Draheim apparently over-estimated himself. Or more didn't expect the impossible child. Oh and it felt she was a bit OP at the end but then it's pretty much to be expected because COME ON with parents like those it's amazing that's the city wasn't blown up as collateral. No point in dragging out an ending when the story has truly ended, anyway. To be honest, I've stopped caring about the quickness since I read that epilogue! Sooooo saaaaadddddd... I can't get over this. Sadness! I mean happy but... nnngggghhhhh.

I'm sorry I'm trying to give... some kind of review here but I'm still encased in feels. This was a really nice story though, and an interesting ending because wow even though I kind of expected it it was still a surprise. Especially the paternal part because that was just completely unexpected. Sad sidestory too. It's part of the reason I just can't help but wonder about Lucius' other parental unit... oh well I'll let it go. Not my life. (Or real life but that's not important).

But yeah so wow this story had a lot more to it than the summary implied. That's also a good summary like wow props.

My vocabulary in this review is so impressive.

I hope you could see the sarcasm in that okay back to the story: I loved it. I'm now pretty much convinced that I'll love everything you write so this should be made into some kind of pre-existing law for each review or something. This story was so different too! Well, different from KA and Why me? though I'm not sure if all three are that similar at all in any case. They all involved badass female leads...that's it. I mean KA technically has some supernatural but it's really not all that much at all to be honest and it's probably not supernatural at all, butjust some kind of racism on the bad guy's part. I've forgotten his name-sorry I zipped through that-the story's internalized completely but the bad guy? Not so much. Haven't forgotten Alex though, or Z, Danny-O, Felix, and the crew though.

Alright I'll stop here because I really have nothing helpful to say. Sorry, that tends to happen when I love a story-it's practically perfect in my eyes. I'd have to come back later, when I'm not coming off the high of spending consecutive hours enjoying the story and seeing how it ends.

Deets
Purplekitten98 chapter 18 . 12/28/2012
I LOVED this story! I don't get who Lucius is though, - is he Lucifer's son and who is his mother? I'm sad now, I was just cheering because Matt was alive and well (with a few bonus powers) and now he's dead again! But anyay, he lived his life - I was kind of hoping he wouldn't die because of the pheonix powers. I would love to read sequel about Lucius (once I get his parentage cleared up) and I wanted to know more about the Elementals too. Why Me and The Buttler Games both sound really good. I think I would prefer to read Why Me right now but I would also like to find out more about The Buttler Games. What are the games about? What do they have to do? Does it have anything to do with The Hunger Games?
Either way I enjoy your style of writing so whichever story you decide to go for, I'm ready to read it!
Purplekitten98 chapter 17 . 12/28/2012
Wow! I couldn't have guessed Lucifer was her father! That came as a surprise but I'm happy I got half of it right! Matt's alive! :)
Purplekitten98 chapter 16 . 12/28/2012
I knew it! She is half Pheonix and the voice in her head is her mum -the pheonix! Matt better not die he's too nice to die! Finally the crazy, messed up guy is dead! Yaaaaaaay!
Purplekitten98 chapter 13 . 12/25/2012
Wow! This Draheim dude is crazy! I think Nyx is the 'partner' in the prophecy. I worked it out in the last chapter but forgot to mention it - this chapter confirmed it. She probably has something to do with the Pheonix too right?
Purplekitten98 chapter 12 . 12/25/2012
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed for a while - I haven't had time to read. But I see you have kept your promise of updating so i'm going to have to read really fast to catch up! I love the chapter as usual but i wanted to ask if you made up the prophecy yourself - because it is very well written. It doesn't give too much away and rhyms too (I'm not very good at writing rhyming peotry so i am very impressed with your prophecy)! I probably won't be reviewing every chapter from now on as i have a lot of catching up to do but i will review if i have a question or another theory. ;) Keep writing!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 18 . 12/24/2012
AMazing amazing chapters! I didn't really think about the epilogue until the end and I had to make sure I was reading it right. I love how you ended it the way you did though. I also love that we find out who her parents are in the last chapter. I wonder how the counsil reacted. I guess that's where my imagenation comes in.
This was an interesting story, and I'm sad that it's over. :(
Merry Christmas if you celebrate it, and if you don't then happy holidays! :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 16 . 12/22/2012
Amazing chapter! I wonder what happened to her and why her powers came out like that and what they were. I'm sure things will get even more interesting.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 15 . 12/22/2012
Amazing chapter! I wonder what will happen to him! I hope you update soon! This should be good...
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 14 . 12/21/2012
Amazing chapter! I wonder how this'll turn out. I hope she gets her powers back! It should be interesting to see her new immage once this is all over. XD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 13 . 12/20/2012
Amazing amazing chapters! I love that this one was so long! I can't wait to see what happens!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 11 . 12/19/2012
Amazing chapters! Things are definitely heating up! And there's Mat again... XD he always shows up in the wierdest of ways/places.
I was wondering if you're interested in reading my story "The Descendants"?
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Purplekitten98 chapter 9 . 12/18/2012
Another cliff-hanger! Why do you torture me so much? :P
Purplekitten98 chapter 8 . 12/18/2012
Hey, I have a new theory: Nyx is half fire Elemental Demon! By the way the cover for this book is really cool (I only looked it now). Did you make it?
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 9 . 12/18/2012
Amazing chapter! And things get even more complicated... I wonder who he is and how he's alive...?
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
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