|Reviews for When I Happened Upon The Lies|
| Felrain chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
This was excellent, I like the way you constructed it. Well done!
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
I think this is exactly how anyone would feel when confronted with the truth after being fed so many lies. I think you capture that raw emotion and shock, tinged with some clarity so well that it really is an art form in itself. The imagery, especially that of the fog, was superb and really went well with the theme of the poem. This is a brilliant poem, as always.