Reviews for Innate Devastation
Ygg chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Powerful, moving and very thought-provoking with magnificent imagery! Although I do think that our breath not just disarms life but also let it flourish and grow because without breath we would be dead. Well written!
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I am lost for words, beautiful, you make such small details, the most insignificant and minute aspect and yet you manufacture an elaborate poem which is truly amazing. Another superb piece Eleantris, truly amazing yet again.
Tepid Waters chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
Oh my god, I love this. This is what I love about your poetry; that you'll pick the tiniest minute detail and create something really enjoyable to read from it. How do you do this? I'm in awe.
madame matryoshka chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Oh wow, this is beautiful! I especially loved the last two stanzas ("Is that all we / are? - Beings who have the power / to dismember and / disarm life, / just by breathing?") - very powerful.
Annarina chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
The last two stanzas... just, dude. :D xx
longlostwriter chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
This is beautiful, and I love it. Great job.