Reviews for Pirate Law
tomcat941 chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
I really enjoyed this. The range of different and unique characters was particularly interesting to read, and their motives for what they were doing were very clear, so it made it very believable. The world you created was also very interesting, and believable. Howeerr, i think you spent to much time at the start explaining everything. This is just personal taste, but i prefer a bit of action at the start, rather than having detailed explanations about what the character looks like, however, i think you used it effectively, and it worked okay. There is one line of dialogue that needs correcting- "The hell is that supposed to me?"
Should be "What the hell is that supposed to mean?" Just a small point, but you might want to correct it. Anyway, it was a thoroughly engaging story.
hotleafjuice chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Its great, the emotions of how and what Linc went through and how he reacted were what I enjoyed most.