Reviews for Fly
unknown drifter chapter 1 . 10/11/2001
very interesting 'story'. it painted interesting pictures. quite good, and about 2 times as long as any of my poems posted here!
Miyamashi chapter 1 . 6/14/2001
I loved it! I also wrote a poem named fly, but it's nothing like this!
me chapter 1 . 6/7/2001
wow. that WAS really long. not bad, not bad. kind of cryptic and disjointed. (course that's always ok)there are some lines i would suggest putting together. still, good job