This was so sweet and funny! I loved it :)

Love it :)

Ah, this was pure loveliness, tinted with humour and reminded me of perfection and a rare delicacy that is a beautiful, smile-worthy oneshot.
Seriously though I loved this! It was fantastic and awesome and hilarious and I'm still smiling! :) Great job!

Okay, I can't quite convey just how much I adore this story. IT IS SO CUTE, I CAN'T EVEN. :O

It's well-written and it's got a good mobility, it gives you just enough of a history for you to figure out what's going on, it's fluffy, it's cheeky, it's just plain-fucking-adorable. :D Also, the plot's unique. I don't know why it's not more popular than it is.

It's one of my new favorites now. :D Good job!

-Rhee.

That was lovely, Maggie! I loved how you used the prompt, very cute. Kent and his sister are also adorable together. Evie was such a great MC and she made me laugh, especially when she checked the fridge. Her and Kent seemed like great friends, and I can only imagine that they'll be an even better couple. Fantastic, flawless story. Great work :)

-Ali

Hi, it's Juliet! Every SC entry gets a review, so here is yours: The general tone of this one-shot was really…feel-good (in a great way). It was very sweet; I like the development into Kent and Evelyn’s relationship. The little hints in the beginning about something have happened was a good leadup to the actual explanation of what happened. This reminded me of Ed Sheeran’s song, Little Bird (“If I kissed you, would your mouth breathe this truth? Darling how I miss you, strawberries taste like lips do”).
It was just sweet and not cliché. Your interpretation of the fountain photograph tugged at my hopeless romantic heartstrings—who wouldn’t want a boy to declare something like Kent did? The Shakespeare reference was both amusing and lovely. I hope you participate again next round!

I love it.
-Cam

"Shut up and kiss me, Evie, or I'll dunk you in two feet of water."
best line

I may or not have melted into a pile of mush because of how cute this story was. I can't believe Kent paid his little sister to leave them alone, that's both romantic and mean at the same time and not many men can pull that off :P. Kudos on the insanely cute story :)

The moment when they kissed gave me goose bumps! And Kent was so romantic in doing that. Your English needs a little work but overall it was great :)

This is really cute. I usually don't like stories where there is more dialogue than narration but yet you sold this to me! It was powerful and actually, the dialogue was a lot more intense and still sold the story. I loved your characters! They were realistic and really funny! This is a great story, and I'm so happy that you've entered it into the starcross'd category!

Sweet story! I like the plot twist when the sister revealed about Kent's plan haha :)

That was faaaaaaaaantastic! Omg, I loved it so much! I love how Kent and Evie had that back story and the little hints you gave about something happening at the party. It was so cute and Kelsey sounds like a little devil. I also don't think I spotted any errors so great work!

Hey, cute oneshot! You made a few mistakes in the following sentence: "The jacket dark green and was at least two sizes to big on me." I think you meant - 'The jacket was dark green and at least two sizes too big on me.' Good luck in the contest! I love ADR! :)

aww, that was cute. it made me grin when she keeps mentioning the fridge ;)

only noticed one typo - "I was loosing my mind." - i think losing is with one 'o'

This was wonderful! I adore your one-shots :)