Reviews for The Way It Used To Be
Mr Theory chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
I don't really get it.
CRAZEDbySUGAR chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
wow...the mindsets between the boy and The Soldier...one relaxed wondering what the future will bring meanwhile the other is fighting to protect his past (in a way...the beach holds his memories after all)
this is beautifully written :)
I love itX3
Keep on writing :D
ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
This is a really intriguing piece you've written, the way you contrast the boy and the soldier's points of view is a pretty nice technique. I think it shows the innocence of childhood really well :)
MysteriousFire chapter 1 . 12/4/2012
Very nice story! I like how he asbolutely no idea what the future will bring, but keeps wondering.
What war can do with one's life...