Reviews for Electric Wire
BexishDevil chapter 20 . 1/2/2013
sequel? And you should so try to publish this if you would run over it and spell/grammar check it, I think you could publish it and sell it.


sky8677 chapter 17 . 1/1/2013
Love it!
Alice6700 chapter 16 . 12/31/2012
Really like this story :) please update soon!
sky8677 chapter 16 . 12/31/2012
I really do love all this story :)
BexishDevil chapter 16 . 12/29/2012
Good! I can't wait for the next chapter, Noah and Brooke fighting has been driving me crazy!

Amy90 chapter 16 . 12/29/2012
I think after all of this, Noah might be able to add two and two on his own. But still, it's kind of stupid that Brooke doesn't tell him. Maybe, if she really can't talk about it, she could at least give Joe or Nick the permisson to tell Noah?
I mean, this whole secrecy is just unnecessary.
Holsiepops chapter 15 . 12/27/2012
Awwww love this! Its super cute story! Please update soon :)
Amy90 chapter 15 . 12/27/2012
Why can't she just tell Noah the whole story? To me she seems to be pretty much over it. And everyone important to her seems to know the main details. So where's the problem? It's obvious she wants to tell him...
And somehow I'm suspecting that she'll get over Noah so quickly. I mean, they're married after all. ;)
DownAndToTheLeft chapter 9 . 12/26/2012
NO! Not Vegemite, NO!
Amy90 chapter 14 . 12/26/2012
This story is so cute! There's a lot of tension in it, it's great! And I love the big brothers, as annoying as they sometimes are, they still look out for Noah and Brooke. Can't wait to read more!
Abbyluvsyou chapter 14 . 12/25/2012
I love this chapter! Please, please, please! upload soon!
BexishDevil chapter 9 . 12/21/2012
Fairy bread? Never heard of it but it sounds good
sky8677 chapter 8 . 12/20/2012
I love all the story but this chapter was amazing! The nickname was so funny!
DownAndToTheLeft chapter 6 . 12/18/2012
UUUUUUUUUUUGH. you write good stories...but I must gets more !
BexishDevil chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
I really like this story! I would buy it if it was an actual book.

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