YES
THEY SURVIVED THE TUMULT
I am so joyful right now.

That was perfect! Thank you so much for this, what a brilliant ending, I can't stop grinning, I just want to hug everything :)
Are you planning to write an epilogue or sequel? (No pressure whatsoever, I'm just curious)
Thank you again, so, so much.
:)
India.

They could score the same maybe? I hope so, or at least that something goes right in this situation. Poor them ...
Thank you for the chapter though. :)

I saw this coming.
But I didn't really see THIS coming.
I mean, after the best part of the relationship always comes something terrible, but I honestly did not expect Julian to just...
Wow.
I can't wait to know what happens next.

Sorry I'm so late to review, some extra weird crap happened with my account, but it's all been resolved now.
All I can say is, I love Marianne so much right now, it's almost enough to make me give up being straight.

"bla bla bla the sweetness of his tonge."

I don't know why but that minor spelling error amongst all of that perfect English really made me laugh.

Never expected this story to carry on for this long. Not that I'm complaining. They're so cute, but it just reminds me of my forever aloneliness. (Cries)

Aww, such a romantic date, chocolate strawberries and brownies, a picnic in the park at night and kissing in the rain. :) I really enjoyed reading this chapter. It was great reading a fluffy and cute chapter, even though I like reading about drama. Julian and Robert deserve it. :)

SO OVERJOYED RIGHT NOW
That was the sweetest thing on the planet!
I love their relationship, they're nothing short of perfect.

Wow...I haven't been able to put this story down. I started reading it a couple days ago and I love it. A very good take on R&J. Can't wait to read what's next. Really looking forward to Robert and Julian being intimate with each other.

I am not getting over that for a really long time.
' 'I haven't used a lot, it's still fairly full,' he says, and when I read the word lubricant, I think the sheer intensity of what I've gotten into overwhelms me and I hear him say, 'Robert?' before I pass out.'
That was unforgettable.
Well, Robert's ordeal turned out much differently than Julian's. I suppose it fits with the irony of Rob thinking that he wanted to be as strong as Julian.
Of course, I can never wait 'till next week, even if I have to do. Keep it up!

Hello there dear author :) I would just like to say that you have written a wonderful story and I can't wait to see more You asked a couple of chapters ago how we found this story and where we're from, and so here is my answer. I found this story by scrolling through slash stories and yours just happened to catch my interest, and I'm glad it did :) As for where I'm from, I'm Swedish Hope to see more soon and good luck writing :)

Chapter 19 made me really happy and I especially liked to read more about Robert's thoughts and emotions. But poor Julian. Maybe his father wants to demonstrate his power. It's horrible that they treat him like that. I just hope Robert and Julian will at least be able to enjoy their time together.
I really enjoyed reading these chapters. :)

That whole rant backfired harder than a cow on a diet of burritos. And I'm talking the extra spicy kind from ACTUAL mexican restuarants (Huge diference between those and Taco Bell).
Sorry, lots of strange analogies keep popping up these days.
Anyway, WOW. That was...so sad. I'm almost furious. It's like a sick mindgame, what Julian's father is doing.
Can't wait until next chapter!

You are using all the clichés in the book, which normally I would frown upon, but for some reason it really works.
- high school setting with bishounens; works because this story's not 'serious' enough for it to seem forced. To me it's a comedy, and in a comedy you can do almost everything as long as you do it right.
- rich family/pressure; you make it work with the rivaling families and the whole company ploy. It gives the richness significance beyond - oh my gucci he's rich and he has a swimming pool and a flatscreen in his room. It gives the story a solid background too.
- She's not your mom; it works because Jules is not a victim. He's got looks and money, so he's not pitiable, therefore the mother things isn't Too cheesy. Plus I like Susan a lot so I'd like the plot twist anyway.
- Mystery; I'm really looking forward to the two cousin's background. You've so far kept enough suspense for it to be interesting. This story is really balanced and sweet.
I liked this chapter because it was cuter and more tender than the story has been up until now. Also, since Jules now has family troubles and shares them with Robert, his affections have gone beyond physical, which is a reassurance. Vanity can only work for so long and it's rarely a good basis for a relationship. I have high hopes for these two.
I'm going to read a few chapters at a time and then review, kay?

So, this chapter made me squeak so much, as I tend to do when something has me REALLY into it and is REALLY good. This is so well written and so believable, I feel like I'm sinking into their world, like I'm trespassing on their lives and watching from the sidelines, whenever I read your amazing writing! Keep up the amazing work, and post again soon! This one chapter a week deal is killing me! Great work, can't wait to read the next chapter!