This is a wonderful spin on the greatest of all angsty love stories. Can't wait to read more!

Hey, looks like you have a fan bigger than me, haha. Looks like I'll have to comment more often :P
But in seriousness, I agree fully with Wings of Beauty. It's a great story, and I'm completely hooked.
I also love that you have a storyline you follow and stick to, whereas some writers tend to publish whatever on the spot without checking over. They are the ones that tend to write plotless stories that will never end, and probably get put on hiatus from writer's block.
So thank you for being efficient, and doing what every author on FP should be doing... updating your stories.

Woah... What an interesting chapter! I love the tension between Julian and Robert. It only intensifies the whole story. The way Robert feels utterly conflicted about Julian was interesting to read about. How he longs for Julian to talk to him once again. For them to be friends (or something possibly more.) I find his personality kind of funny. How he uses studies to pass away the time. No wonder he is always first place even when he got a job. Smart kid. Smart kid. I absolutely love the ending. When Robert was completely out of character because Julian was being bullied by Paul the Jerk. Lol. I loved all the things Robert said to him. I never thought he would lift his fist and actually sock someone. Oh and that vocabulary. His new vocabulary is very interesting! Lol. This is such a wonderful chapter as always! Thanks for you weekly updates! I love this story very much already :)

Julian. I love Julian. He has to be my favorite character right now. I seriously hate his parents because now is he is gonna get grilled for not making first and even worse going down one place! Please let Julian be alright! His parents are so harsh on him and he is constantly under pressure! How do they expect him to fare well with all that stress on his shoulders. Parents. Pfft! The need to leave poort kid alone and let him have a love life! I liked the beginning because he thought he was sore from having sex. Lol. Too funny. I love how his mind works. Great job once again! I don't mind having you update early cause that means I get to read the newest chapter earlier! YAH! Good luck with your busy weekend :)

This is a confusing, chaotic review, but I tried to be honest:)

Ooookay here goes. I love your introduction. It’s smooth and stunning and I was WITH you instantly. The words you use and the way you string your sentences together, I love it. I would like to quote you numerous times and tell you just how –much-, but that would be pointless. It’s just good.

Your descriptions of Tyler and Benny are funny yet smart. I like the way you introduce them through Julian’s eyes. It works.
When two characters are gorgeous, or even just the love interest, there’s a kind of ‘evident attraction’ that could make the story a tad boring. Just because the single most gorgeous, rich, athletic and intelligent guy in the whole universe doesn’t need much of a personality to lure the other in. Of course you have the whole ‘rival’ thing going to keep things exciting.
I liked the way you pictured the school. With the creamy white walls and the black auditorium.
Julian’s character grows more substantial after the introduction. He’s cute and his tantrum was incredibly amusing. I do dislike Robert, if only just bit, for his arrogance.

Robert’s first impression of Julian is amazing and wonderfully written. I like Julian simply because he’s so irritated all the time. Such an angry boy.
Like I said, the drop dead gorgeous high school boy motive doesn’t appeal to me, nor does the girlish boy thing, but this story is too entertaining to pass up. You really do have an exquisite style.
I’s a pity Julian gets drunk before they can even have a proper conversation, but I know they’ll get there. All in all, job well done!

Hope this was helpful and conveyed my enthusiasm:) !

Great story! Uploads soon.

Is it wrong I keep laughing for some odd reason? I don't know why, but I find them so hilarious! Gosh... I feel sorta bad for Robert. Lol. It was just so funny when he was like the image of innocence was ruined by the swearing. It was kinda hard to stop laughing at the situation. The last part was kinda sexy and I loved it, though I wish Julian didn't fall asleep... Well, a girl can dream can't she? I wonder what will happen when morning comes. I wonder how Julian will react. I'm still loving this. You are doing a great and wonderful job! Keep up the good work! I'm surprised this story is isn't popular or you in general. You have great and spontaneous ideas that should attract many people. You a spectacular author and never say you aren't! I'll keep reviewing just for you :)

I am enjoying your take on a modern-day Romeo and Juliet. The fact that this story is male/male couple only makes me fall in love with the story more by each word I read. I like all the dynamics you set up in order to make the story like the real play. I can see it and I have to say you are doing a wonderful job! I am excited for your story. I can't wait for your next update :)

I had assumed that the older Cauliff, Tyler was the one who set up the party, as the original R & J party was a Caliper one. Jut that doesn't matter too much...

I was hoping you'd do a random Christmas special story for the readers... :p

Too much to ask for? Oh well, I look forward to the story updates...

Amazing start love all the little touches can't wait for more

Hey. I think this is a really great start to a story and I can't wait to read more!