Reviews for She breaks
piggapalooza chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
Elegantly sad.
DarkenedLullaby chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
This painted a picture in my head, it would be a great poem to write a piece of literature from. Would you mind if I try to?
Cathy Carroll chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
You wrote my story. My childhood love who became my love of a lifetime. He was waiting for me one day when I left school. Grade 8. He was in Sixth grade. As adults when he opened the door for me he would say " age before beauty". He was truly beautiful.

Thank you, Sam!
Brianarae0408 chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This poem is so tragic and compelling, truly powerful.