Reviews for The Darkwater Chronicles
DJV-Trio-blast chapter 6 . 1/11/2013
Alex is a very interesting person, her train of thought is very interesting too :P up to the next chapter, you should write for a living you're very good at it and you would make a fortune.
DJV-Trio-blast chapter 4 . 1/11/2013
Flipping dolls... i dont have fears and you play with my imagination ... i dont like you very much and my stuff animals are looking at me like im crazy. Math on the first period of the day... sounds like next semester for me :P and i will enjoy it ha, any way many more chapters to go and to watch as i read them
DJV-Trio-blast chapter 2 . 1/11/2013
Little towns are annoying, but you have all the experiences of one don't cha :P, anyway cant wait to read the next little disturbing chapter :)
DJV-Trio-blast chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Books, books, books, desk, papers, grave, window... wait grave ... well there we go, what could possible go wrong :P very good job, u will be reviewing for each MAhahahahahahaha
ALivingDream chapter 10 . 1/7/2013
odd Chapter - But I like it
on wards!
JigglyJelloWithCoconut chapter 14 . 1/7/2013
While I'm not usually a fan of these kinds of stories, this is very well written. Keep writing please!
Long live the magic chapter 11 . 12/21/2012
There are moments when your story scares the shit out of me... I love it \(-)/ update soon
Kate Drake chapter 9 . 12/11/2012
Loved the chapter! Keep up the great work!
ALivingDream chapter 9 . 12/10/2012
It's really creepy of me - I found most of this chapter amusing and weird all at once -

but its an awesome creepy-weird chapter.

and she had a small - amusing ramble :)

That I enjoyed the most

Until chapter 10! - Tally away!
ALivingDream chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
This is starting to get weird and less creepy.

I don't really know how to explain the weird part - its just to me - its starting to get weird.

I'm also hate to admit this - but I agree with the other reviewer of this chapter - its starting to drag on - I also think its because you have Alex talk to herself a lot and in her brain - keeps mumbling on - kinda like I do when i'm over tired.

Sorry - but I must admit this

till next Chapter - Liz
Miggles chapter 9 . 12/10/2012
The only thing I'm confused about is how a knife can be strewn about. :S
I also don't understand the 'boiling her hand' thing - like scrubbing wiht really hot water? And do you mean a 'poet in my head.'?
Otherwise, really good as usual. :)
Kate Drake chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
The story has started to drag a lot for me, I think it has a lot to do with the character's voice. For the first time I found myself skipping whole paragraphs.

I'll keep reading; hopefully it gets better.
Miggles chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
'all of the sudden' - I think it should be all of a sudden instead, and if you put I had already gone through before 'Half of the bookshelves' the sentence will make more sense.
Also, 'Potatoes, probably.' will make more sense if you change it to 'From the potatoes, probably.'
The style is still really good though, please update soon! :)
ALivingDream chapter 7 . 12/8/2012
Short Chapter but very filling mmmh

I honestly don't know what to make of this chatter - I think I really need to read it a couple of times to really grasp it - but what I grasp is interesting and really creepy-good

I have no idea if creepy is what your aiming for - but your really achieving it in almost every aspect...

Tally ho - Till next chapter
ALivingDream chapter 6 . 12/8/2012
The Creepy factor just kind went up a notch or 12...

I like it :)

Awesome Job so far :)

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