Reviews for Vision
Mischief Not Yet Managed chapter 1 . 12/6/2012
I gonna go right ahead and quote you here (thanks by the way): "Okay, well, I'm impressed." I know exactly what you mean, and really, i don't think poeple recongize important problems like this as often as they should. I wouldn't format it in sentences, but that's just me. Well done
Baby BlueJay chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
*whistles* Dang, this was really deep! I'm surprised by your perspective of the world and the truth that comes with it. I like the rhyme at the end too. You could definitely do pretty well as a rapper if you work at it hard enough. Don't give up, X. :)