|Reviews for Memories of Time|
| J.R.Greene chapter 1 . 5/8/2013
I enjoyed this! I like to imagine a backstory for poetry (it's my weird little quirk), and that's the best part of this poem. It is just enough to leave you wanting just a little more... good work. :D
| Social Anxiety Lives chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
If a poem is going to be short it really needs to pop. I think you have a nice set up. It sounds lovely when read out loud. Make sure you always read a poem out loud. It helps to see if there is a nice flow. I think you could try a bit of line enjambment. It might not work with what your final goal was, but it could be a fun writing exercise. The line "forover set in stone" I am sure you meant forever and this line is a tad bit cliché. Try a fresh image and see if it gives the poem a bit more depth and feeling. I would also suggest looking for another title. I know you are trying to connect to that last line, but I want something more original. Perhaps a one word deal that represents the emotions you are trying to portray. Overall, very good. I can't complain!
| tolerate chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
It's short and wonderful. I loved the words you used.
| ygg chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
Somehow I find the idea expressed beautifully in your poem very emotionally refreshing. Love the mysterious, almost spiritual touch of it. Great work I must say!
| Love A Mysterious Thing chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Wow this had depth in such few words. Another great write. It amazes how much detail people like your self can put in such few stanzas. Great write again!
| Silvore chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Awesome! Great poem, you've managed to catch it's essence really well in a few short lines (something I could never really do). Keep up with it!
| AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 12/6/2012