|Reviews for half-moon|
| logan89 chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
This is a great start to a story for you with good detail and history of your main characters. I especially like the imprisonment of the king and alpha in time, which could be a setup for your future chapters. The powerful sword that the Great Mother Goddess made is good creativity in how you weave that into this first chapter. I hope you decide to add more to this story, because you already have the foundation and material for it.