Reviews for What Do You Know?
R. Ficst chapter 1 . 5/28/2013
Powerful and truth.
Felrain chapter 1 . 1/15/2013
Short and simple. Very nice :D
Naver chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Oh, this makes me think about him as a person. I wonder if he knew, even still, would he understand.. the cries..
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Brilliant, so short yet so effective in saying so much. Congratulations on another superb piece.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Hmm, this is a very peculiar one. The emotion is very strong but it's the He that captures my attention. You almost question why he's there? If he cannot help the speaker when he/she is clearly upset. And you also can't help but wonder why he cries the speaker's tears when he does not know the reason behind them, nor stops to listen. It almost suggests he's like God in a sense, like the speaker believes in God, but finds that God doesn't always listen to his/her pain, yet God is around. For such few lines, you convey a lot here. Brilliant piece as the simple imagery and emotion is conveyed in such few words yet says a lot nonetheless. Brilliant!
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
I love the image of pouring out secrets like water. Beautifully written, and very true.