Reviews for Woman in the Mirror
Miss Valentina chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
I liked it, but there was one mistake. "I touches my hand and I cry." I think you meant touch, not touches.

Besides that, it was okay. I didn't understand some of it, but I think I have an idea.

Cheers,
Gone
R.K. Iris chapter 1 . 3/21/2013
Wow, that was short...I think a poem or something down that lane would do more justice to this piece than a story format-but that's what I think and i do, if I have ideas of this size. It's probably flash fiction in its loosest sense, but since I haven't read flash fiction, I wouldn't know-I jut know it should be around 50 words.
It's a pretty good idea though-tried, tested but never out of style.

R. K. Iris.
Raleigh Daniels Jr chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
It's always good to battle internal forces from within you.