Reviews for The Legend of a Fighter OLD VERSION
random chapter 9 . 2/24/2015
This is extremely amusing.
random chapter 4 . 2/23/2015
I love that end. Just 'It looked awesome.' Not "Oh, it was in an emerald forest, next to a glistening lake, which was fed by the river that tapered down the majestic mountain that overlooked the camp, as though it was protecting it. And there were ponies!"
Lonely chapter 33 . 11/16/2013
Damn, I was hooked to this story after the first chapter and I couldn't stop reading :D
Really amazing job! I really didn't except that at all but this was so amazing! I need to read the other stories of you for sure! I'll see you in next story! AMAZING JOB!
Lolitroy chapter 4 . 5/4/2013
I still think Mabel is awesome.

Nice interaction between teh two by the way, but didn't they say they were gonna kill him? Makes me wonder.

I'll continue reading/reviewing another day, heh. I read a lot of stories and never update mine haha
Lolitroy chapter 3 . 5/4/2013
Holy crap. Kill!? Oh well.

It's been three chapters and I already love Mabel, haha.
Lolitroy chapter 2 . 5/4/2013
Fiona will die violently, won't she?

Is Mabel a girl or a boy? I didn't get it, heh.

So far, so good. I liked the introduction and the way you set the world before anything happens, and I also liked how you introduced Fiona before we knew how EVAHL she was.

Besides your summary is catchy!
Lolitroy chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
The introduciton was... interesting...
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 33 . 4/19/2013
Amazing chapter! It's almost over? *sniff* oh well. I'll read the next one. :)
Haha technically it was 8:05 here when you posted the chapter, so technically you aren't late, so technically no problem. ;)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
dizziness chapter 31 . 4/6/2013
Just casually quoting starkid at the end! Haha! Joe walker dies. I think it's my favourite so far!
Why doesn't he like jake? Jake is awesome! I LOVE JAKE! And I now get why she is a bit odd! Woo!
Well done peanut! I'm so proud of you! :')
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 31 . 4/5/2013
amazing chapter! It was a little hard to follow, but I think I get it now. It isn't understandable from the beginning of the conversation, but later on it becomes more clear who's related to whom. it's good that you're offering explanations though... I don't think many people will need them. I'm practically famous for being in a constant state of confusion and, like I said, I get it. I wonder what this will mean for her and her friends/acquaintences/whoever's involved.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 30 . 3/30/2013
Amazing chapter! You're right, not much happens, but I wonder about Samien's comment right at the end...
Happy Easter to you too! :)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
dizziness chapter 29 . 3/26/2013
I am sorry to say that i am too busy saving team starkid from starkid hating aliens, with my trusty steed bullseye, to write a review.
Only joking, I would never do that to you.
Another great chapter peanut! I am loving this story and loving jake more and more! ;)
Keep it up!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 29 . 3/23/2013
Amazing amazing chapter! I don't think it seems too off from the rest of the story... I mean it doesnt feel like you just squeezed it in. I wonder what's going on with Mabel? I can't wait to find out!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
MorWolfMor chapter 29 . 3/22/2013
Hmm better senses and control of her magic...cool :) I wonder who her Familiar/Laniar will be..good job on the chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Wolfy
MorWolfMor chapter 28 . 3/18/2013
Ooh this is quite good so far :) I'm really enjoying this story! :3 I liked the bit with the lion, and the wolf dream/vision thing, that was cool :D I can't wait to read more :) good luck in your writing!

Wolfy
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