Reviews for The Legend of a Fighter OLD VERSION
crywolf-girl23 chapter 27 . 3/11/2013
Well, the current title it quite original, although i don't understand the connection it has with the story itself. But that's what intrigued me to read it.
Anyway, if you are really considering to change it, the 'Legend of a Fighter' seems an interesting choice. The other one sounds quite ordinary and overused. In the end, though, it's your decision. I'm just suggesting here.
Editor chapter 27 . 3/8/2013
I didn't complain about the ice cream!
crywolf-girl23 chapter 26 . 3/3/2013
I start reading the story today and i couldn't stop. You have amazing writing skills. I really liked it so far. Jake is sure one of my favorites, but i can't say that i dislike anyone. Keep up with the good work! Off to the next chapter...
dizziness chapter 25 . 2/23/2013
familiar! thats what i meant in my other comment! and you really shouldn't talk to your characters, you'll turn crazy like me and you know you don't want that. there can't be two of me. the world would explode. anyway, make your characters wash, otherwise they will get bullied in the story world!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 25 . 2/22/2013
Amazing chapter! I loved the bit at the end with the guy with the knife. It kinda added a sense of danger/mystery to the whole scene. I hope you remember him, because it would be interesting to see what's up with him and why he was there in the first place. I can sorta guess, but it would be better if I knew for sure... ;)
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
dizziness chapter 24 . 2/16/2013
big adventure time! woo hoo! and is misaki hiroki's other half? soul mate thingy? i can't remember what you called them in this book, i get confused with soul mates! they name them differently in different books! confused! although, it's not too hard to confuse me. anyway, cool chapter peanut! can't wait for the big adventure in the big wide world to begin!
dizziness chapter 23 . 2/16/2013
how can you say that about snow peanut?! just man up and deal with it! we get it once a year so enjoy it whilst it lasts! that's all i have to say on that matter.
YAY! jake is going to live! i'm so happy! but i like emily too! sad face!
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 23 . 2/8/2013
Amazing chapter! Hmmm... it's interesting that she was able to kill the snake. I loved the ending as well! I can't wait to see what happens!
P.S. your A/Ns are extremely random. :D we're supposed to get a snow storm. 40 cm or 16 in if that's what you prefer.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Guest chapter 22 . 2/3/2013
what mean people! i would protect jake! i love him! and really good chapter! and please, if you ever own joe walker, give him to me as a birthday present! please!
Guest chapter 21 . 1/31/2013
dont worry you'll get through the writers block! and if you don't i'll just... poke you until you do! because i'm kind like that. and i want to read the rest of the book.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 22 . 2/1/2013
Amazing chapter! I don't think it sounded too wierd. In this case, I think the future commentary adds a tone of mystery to the chapter/story because she knows what's going to happen but readers don't.
I can't wait to see what will happen!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Astramican B chapter 7 . 1/30/2013

Sorry, not good at reviewing, really. Can't get more coherent, but I think the emoticon sums it up...

Heather chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Wow. I picked up your story today and couldn't stop reading until i was through the recent update. I love your writing, the scenery, and the characters. Really, keep writing:)
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 21 . 1/25/2013
Amazing chapter! I know how hard it is to write when you just can't put things into words... I don't really have much to say about the chapter...
I have a question. I think I asked this before, but I forget your answer. In your opinion, is it harder to write chapters like this or action chapters?
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 20 . 1/19/2013
Amazing chapter, even though it was a bit short! Hmmm... this will be an interesting problem in the future. You sure know a lot about snakes. XD I hope you update soon!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
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