Reviews for The Legend of a Fighter OLD VERSION
dizziness chapter 20 . 1/19/2013
Thank you peanut! that's my new nickname for you, because i like peanuts and i like you! great logic, i know. anyway, oh no, an evil snake is after jake! my favourite!
dizziness chapter 19 . 1/16/2013
This is my favourite story on here. Keep up the good work. You've made me develop a crush on jake! I hardly ever develop crushes on the characters.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 19 . 1/12/2013
Amazing chapter! I don't know if I've said this before, but I love how the story is almost being spoken as opposed to written. There are parts when she actually talks to the readers themselves.
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Silent Crescendo chapter 5 . 1/11/2013
I've been surprised y this. I usually don't read stuff on here... But this is actually kinda cool! :D
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 18 . 1/4/2013
Amazing chapter! I wonder why she passed out? Maybe just exhaustion... I can't wait for the main plotline to come in! I'll love this story so much more than I do, which is sort of hard...
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 17 . 12/28/2012
Amazing chapter! I love the conversation about the exploding tornado... XD I can't wait for the plotline to start!
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 16 . 12/25/2012
Amazing chapter! I love that she has control but it isn't perfect... at all. I can't wait to find out what's up with her gift. It seems strange that she can hear thoughts but it's not an air gift... I think. XD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Corinne90 chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
The very first page is great, and since I'm reading I should go ahead and review's good keep it up.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 15 . 12/21/2012
Amazing chapter! That's an interesting conflict. Just make sure that the mension of the new character isn't totally random and never mentioned again. Haha nice comments at the top and bottom. XD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Grace chapter 14 . 12/15/2012
Jake is so funny. I've giggled a few times at the things he's said. Looking forward to a new chapter on Friday. :)
BlooDreamer -UnNameD chapter 14 . 12/15/2012
w0w! I was really hooked up in the story. I read it continually without any pause. I'll be waiting for the next one!
BlooDreamer -UnNameD chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Great story! I was caught by your first chapter. Can't stop reading after it. You have a great way of catching readers eyes.
Nyx'sReincarnation chapter 14 . 12/14/2012
Amazing chapter! Classes certainly seem interesting. I know I'd be borred to death if I had to sit there all morning and do school work... XD
Keep up the amazing work! :) (:
Tarah xXx
Grace chapter 12 . 12/11/2012
Wow. I am hooked! I love all the characters in this story (especially Luke and Mabel)and you have such an engaging way of writing! Obviously there are a few (but hardly any) grammar mistakes and you're probably right about needed to split chapter 11 but I can't wait to find out what will happen next. Please hurry up and post the next chapter soon! chapter 12 . 12/7/2012
Really good stuff, cant wait for more
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