Reviews for Dying to be Thin
Pepto chapter 1 . 3/26/2013
THIS WAS THE MOST AMAZING STORY I'VE EVER READ IN MY WHOLE ENTIRE LIFE. IT WAS LIFE CHANGING. :'(
I'M NOT EVEN LYING RIGHT NOW, I STARTED CRYING WHILE READING THIS... AND IT'S NOT BECAUSE MY CONTACT IS BUGGING ME. OH MY LORDYYYY, THIS IS AMAZING!
Jamie Saunders chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Amazinng writing, the only thing I would say is that for only being the first chapter there were alot of characters introduced. I would try to cut down on all of the characters. Otherwise I believe that your story is off to an excellent start! :)
SashaRice chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Hey!
C'mon... been waiting for ages for you to post! :)
myheart4you chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
The storyline is rather cliche (but then again, so is my story), but it is well-written, which is all that matters.
I like how you showed that she doesn't see her self as being anorexic since a 5 foot girl is supposed to be 95 pounds. It was really realistic.
I'm looking forward to what you do with this story!
Demonic Angelicism chapter 1 . 12/7/2012
Tee-hee. And you say you're not a good writer! PFFFTTTTTZ Thats a bunch of Patrick FLUB!