Reviews for The Display
Fading-Scream chapter 21 . 12/18/2012
While this chapter has a little bit more substance than the last, it is blatantly clear that you're not a dancer. The tango would never be danced in the corporate setting, perhaps replacing it with the cha-cha would be more appropriate. Secondly, dancing in a pool with a dress on is virtually impossible due to the skirt portion creating mass friction in the water (I've tried) and unless you're taking a page from Dirty Dancing and attempting lifts (which would NEVER be done in any ballroom other than on the professional dancing stage). Both the tango and lifts are seen as impolite and improper amongst the social elite. Overall, the last few chapters have been below your starting standards sadly. :(
You say No chapter 20 . 12/17/2012
Woah, that was interesting, it's too bad the nice feel didn't last as long and the shift came fast.
I like how in every chapter something special is revealed.
Carmel March chapter 20 . 12/17/2012
This story is absolutely fantastic. You write so, so well and I just love how you've woven the plot. I can't wait to read more! :)
jakbnimble chapter 20 . 12/17/2012
What a cliffhanger! Cannot wait until your next update!
Fading-Scream chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
I love the story line and the romance behind it all... but to be honest each time you have a scene which involves the movement I don't really see the point in it. For example, the scene with the Mosquito Experiment lost me completely and I had to read it more than once to try and understand the logic behind it. I still don't really see how it all fits together. I'm struggling to see your thought process throughout the story and it feels a bit all-over-the-place.
I love the characters and how you have described and captured them though.
xxx
kdramacrazy chapter 13 . 12/16/2012
That sounds like so much fun.
kdramacrazy chapter 12 . 12/16/2012
Eeeekkk protective Milo is awesome! :)
You say No chapter 19 . 12/16/2012
Wow this one is good and cute
kdramacrazy chapter 10 . 12/16/2012
Yeah Beatles! One of my favorite bands ever! :) Awesome party scene.
kdramacrazy chapter 9 . 12/16/2012
Lol I can just imagine Rory with a half panicked half irritated look just wishing to get away from her. Lmao :)
kdramacrazy chapter 4 . 12/16/2012
Oooohhh the intrigue hehe it makes me giddy ;)
kdramacrazy chapter 3 . 12/16/2012
Lmao! I love Danae's personality! Your character description is so great!
kdramacrazy chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Wow! I can actually feel how hot it is there. Your sense of description is amazing! Love this!
melissa struck chapter 19 . 12/16/2012
listen up... dis stry is enchanting !.. i mean really ! idk how u come up with such awesum ideas or ur imagination is jus dt gud ...after these last two chaptrs , i ws like " wat was dat!? " , bt after a 2nd read i m lyk " wow ! dis is smting " .. so plz update soon dear .. vl b waiting ! :)
jakbnimble chapter 19 . 12/16/2012
Your ideas are so creative. I wonder what other adventures they're in for. :) Nice to see this romance blossoming even more!
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