Reviews for The Display
jakbnimble chapter 18 . 12/15/2012
Such a touching chapter!
You say No chapter 18 . 12/15/2012
Aw, this makes me feel selfish and crazy, well thanks.
Of course I thought my problems were horrible, but oh well, thank you for another good chapter that explains some things.
You say No chapter 17 . 12/14/2012
Aw, I don't know if I should be all woohoo, this is awesome or woooow...this...is..awe..some...
Sounds storage but makes sense in my mind
jakbnimble chapter 17 . 12/14/2012
Another lovely chapter! Wonderful description.
yukiteddy chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Nice )
You say No chapter 16 . 12/13/2012
...As always I'm speechless thought it doesn't seem like it if you read this, cause, y'know you're reading this and all...
Fading-Scream chapter 16 . 12/13/2012
A captivating story line :) I'm utterly entranced by Milo and Trevor. A few spelling and grammatical errors (ie. checks is spelt cheques) but we all have a few of those.
To be honest, chapter 16 lost me a bit. Not sure why but my attention drifted in the middle of reading it.
Looking forward to the rest of this story :)
Xxx
jakbnimble chapter 16 . 12/13/2012
Thank you so much for the extra chapter! You've created such an interesting group of people and done a wonderful job of giving them unique personalities.
jakbnimble chapter 15 . 12/13/2012
Oh. My. Goodness. New favorite chapter? I think so! You wouldn't happen to have anymore chapters hidden away, would you? :D
So great! I want to ramble about how awesome this story is, how awesome you are for thinking this up, and for anyone who hasn't read The Display yet but is reading this review, READ THIS STORY! XD
jakbnimble chapter 14 . 12/12/2012
So excited to read more! I am loving your updates. :D
jakbnimble chapter 13 . 12/12/2012
I love the strange lessons she's subjected to, and I love the scene with the horses. So cute!
jakbnimble chapter 11 . 12/12/2012
This is probably my favorite chapter so far. Well, they're all amazing, but this one had me laughing and feeling happy. I wish I could be transported into this chapter to laugh and play and just have fun with them all. :D
Loving Milo's subtle flirtations. ;)
You say No chapter 11 . 12/10/2012
...I wish I could just materialize right behind you and either hug you or kiss you{whichever you prefer} and give you your favorite type of cookie or cereal.
jakbnimble chapter 8 . 12/10/2012
I love how developed and believable your characters are. And may I just say that I LOVE Horton and Aggie! They are hilarious! It was nice to be shown a deeper side of Trevor in this chapter. Can't wait till we see more of Milo too!
You say No chapter 7 . 12/9/2012
...amazing.
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