Reviews for Being Forbes
Baulemare chapter 4 . 12/11/2012
The scenes aren't very long :/ You should study David Mamet, he is a lovely play writer.
Baulemare chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
You should mention at the beginning where they are.

I don't really understand what is going on here. I don't think enough information through the dialogue is being shown.
Baulemare chapter 2 . 12/11/2012
I don't think you need to have that information there. I think it would have made more sense to say something about your character, like where he grew up, describe the girl he is falling for, something interesting.
Baulemare chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Normally when people give a description of the characters in a play they normally just state their name, and sometimes what they look like. You find out all the other information as you read the play, a good play would make all this information absorbed.