Reviews for First Burn
dcdoll chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
Thanks, Hazel! And I really appreciate your review. Sorry, I just have this thing with rhyming. :)) Maybe I'll go free verse sometime. :D
Hazel Encarnado chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
This is beautiful. :))) However, you follow the rules of writing poem so strictly I'm afraid I must suggest you go to .com and see why sometimes free verse is indispensable. I know you said I shouldn't be a critique or something but I'm not condescending your work. XD