Reviews for The Hutch Conspiracy
estrellita24 chapter 3 . 3/30/2013
Wow... just wow
I got interested by the title and started reading right away, it took me like four minutes to finish it! -a new mark-
good story by the way
-Star
littlemisslibrarian chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
Did I mention that Commander Bunnicus is on the top of my list of fictional characters I would like to punch in the face? LOL
littlemisslibrarian chapter 2 . 12/10/2012
White flag surrender. I can see why they would be mad! LOL
Elandil chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Its a new story idea I must admit... and I have to say that it inspires a great deal of kinship towards you as me and my friends spent a whole day working out the kinks in our story about how oranges were going to rise up and snatch control of the earth away from the evil gerbils, however, I digress... A good start though if I may offer one point of criticism : try not to change the PoV too often in chapter as it makes the story harder to follow and a little confusing. Otherwise, you have intrigued me, update soon _
littlemisslibrarian chapter 1 . 12/9/2012
Wasn't there something on the Evil Overlord List about killing your goody two shoes brother? LOL