Reviews for Alpha
name redacted chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
This chapter seems more like a cover blurb. It introduces the idea, but it's all fairly vague (who's someone? What has begun? What great evil? What is the 6th dimension?). I feel like I've been handed a lot of terminology, but the plot hasn't actually been furthered by this. These things will, most likely, make themselves evident through the story. That said, I'm not sure that you need this chapter.
briluvbooks chapter 1 . 1/17/2013
its very short, but very interesting great vocabulary.