Reviews for Night Visitor
Abracadabra41 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I love the naive-ness of the character and how you display it through her childish thoughts envisioning what must be standing there and her solution to make them go away. Very good!
-Abracadabra
alia hasan chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
this is nice
Lia Jenson chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Of course it's scratched from the outside. I'd have been truly surprised if it was from the inside.
Nit-picking aside, it was a nice little short with a good amount of tension and a not-really shocking ending. Will this continue? I think it would do good for the story to continue.
No? Alright, carry on.