Reviews for Night Visitor
Abracadabra41 chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
I love the naive-ness of the character and how you display it through her childish thoughts envisioning what must be standing there and her solution to make them go away. Very good!
alia hasan chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
this is nice
Biganon Z chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Of course it's scratched from the outside. I'd have been truly surprised if it was from the inside.
Nit-picking aside, it was a nice little short with a good amount of tension and a not-really shocking ending. Will this continue? I think it would do good for the story to continue.
No? Alright, carry on.